Author Comments:

demon yoshi rider, 28 Apr 2008 05:23 pm

This is something I've been working on and I want some crit.

Oh and the species is a mantaray/sea thingy because hedgies/foxes echindas and other over used charecters are clich.

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User Comments:

Valky, 28 Apr 2008 05:31 pm

Those eyes look genesis styled.
Pretty good, but it seems some parts ahve more shaidng then others.
Like pantsa nd shirt have 3 consecutive shades. While the tail and hands and head have 2.

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demon yoshi rider, 28 Apr 2008 05:39 pm

Huh that dosen't make sense theres four shades of grey on the skin. One of the shades is lighter then the darkest but lighter then the second one.

Please explain.

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Kiki_Akuma, 28 Apr 2008 06:38 pm

The entire sprite looks Genesis styled. Haha.

Is it just me, or do parts of this seem a bit pillowshaded? Like, uh, the head?

By the by, what's a clich? I only know of cliché.

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Jesus lizard, 30 Apr 2008 06:24 pm

sea thingy?
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O O
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seriousely make a lzard they rock. (yay I made my first recognizable face thing)

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LimesWorper, 01 May 2008 08:41 am

sorry Jesus lizard but you failed, the face is not recognisable in the slightest.

Also I'd disagree with the pillow shading comments and agree with the genesis style ones. Also I think Valky might want to fix his monitor if he can't see that everything uses 4 shades.

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