January 29th, 2008, 10:03 pm - Valence v.2



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THEMASTAOFMARIO, January 29th, 2008, 10:09 pm ( Reply )

his head is sinking into his body o.o



Zmanwarrior, January 29th, 2008, 10:10 pm ( Reply )

WOAH! That comment came fast. It's been what, 5 minutes?



Shard, January 29th, 2008, 10:11 pm ( Reply )

His clothing looks stuck to his body.



Zmanwarrior, January 29th, 2008, 10:13 pm ( Reply )

Yeah,I guess



Zmanwarrior, January 29th, 2008, 10:14 pm ( Reply )

In what way?



THEMASTAOFMARIO, January 29th, 2008, 10:16 pm ( Reply )

his arms are to long, his clothes are skin tight and one hand is bigger than the other



Zmanwarrior, January 29th, 2008, 10:16 pm ( Reply )

I'll get right on it. If I post any improvements, they'll be inside of comments. I don't want to take up the entire comic.



Jc447, January 30th, 2008, 3:25 am ( Reply )

Filthy Recolor.



Zmanwarrior, January 30th, 2008, 2:51 pm ( Reply )

You know what? I'm forgetting it and going through with the comic. I'm not going to keep trying to improve just so people like Jc477 can knock me on my butt. THEMASTEROFMARIO shard, and TomV, thanks for your advise, But I'll settle for this. (Although I might make his pants less clingy) ;-)



LimesWorper, February 24th, 2008, 4:02 pm ( Reply )

I'm sure Jc447 was joking...
Anyway the only real problem I see is the clothing being skin tight. Everything else has been well improved.



Zmanwarrior, March 24th, 2008, 7:48 pm ( Reply )

Actually, I already fixed that. Not that it matters, since the last comment on this page was like, a month ago.

Edit: Exactly a month.



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