Just kidding. I realized that I was just recoloring the body, so on the second sprite I made the leg extending a big baggier. I have been working on making the clothing looser.
Gee, maybe this person is looking for help? Perhaps THAT'S why he "dumped them on the internet"? ...And what's wrong with the name Kitsuné Himora?
Anyway, to the point. The pants go into the shoes. That is... NO. Nonononono. And I see there's some red left in the shoes. Once again, NONONONONO. Just a little tip, give the clothing your own shading rather than just recoloring on the clothes.
Are you going to use the force on meeee? Cuz it really hurts when someone attacks you with the force. Specially through the INTERNET. Aaaah, I'm so scared. Aaaaah.
Have you ever made a single post on Smackjeeves that is actually critqueing, rather than saying crap like "what kind of name is this or that?"
I have a right to name my work whatever the hell I want to name it. And no, it isn't a recolor. Did you even look at the sprite?
Of course, being so predictable, I know that you're just going to turn this post around on me to make it look like I'm the bad guy. Let's see you make a perfect sprite, buddy.
Actually, I spell "r00lz" rules, but y'know, whatever floats your boat. And besides, why the hell would I say "anime rules" in the middle of an arguement or whatever you want to call it?
And as I said, you're trying to make me look like the bad guy. You can't pull that shit on me that you pull on everybody else. There is a difference from critiqueing, and being an ass. If you're going to say anything, at least make it helpful. Do you really think that you can "help" the SmackJeeves community by telling them that their works are "peices of shit" and whatnot. Yet, I realize you haven't actually said that, so don't even go there. You want to help? Then say something constructive. Say something that helps. Say something that spriters could use, rather than trying to be a smart ass. I'm tired of you thinking you rule Smackjeeves with your "supieriour critiqueing".
HEY, SMEEZETTE! Read this, please! Oh, and also...
HAI TOM.
Anydamnway, these sprites need some help before you use them for anything... I'm about to type a lot, but it's worth your time to read it, along with what some of the others have already said. Now then...
There needs to be some actual shading on the clothes, rather then just an outline drawn around a blob of color. It doesn't have to be fancy, but it DOES need to be there; otherwise, your character looks flat. There are tutorials about this; If you look for them, I'm sure they'll help you.
Also, I think you ought to look at his body coloration; his skin tone, his fur/spines/what have you, and his eyes. From what I can see, the color you used for his skin and eyes are EXACTLY the same as Sonic's. If you, at the very least, tweak his eye and skin color, he'll look less like Sonic... or, at least, he'll begin to.
One last thing. I realize his fur/spines are supposed to be black, but he's much too dark! Make his colors contrast some more; The highlight on him should be lighter. Again, that will help with the flat look.
Kitsuné? May I ask, why?
Thats what is called a fox in japan ('Spirit Fox' for direct translation).
and the é should give the same sound in english as e does in japanese.
User Comments:
Smeezette, 14 Nov 2007 05:18 pm
Just kidding. I realized that I was just recoloring the body, so on the second sprite I made the leg extending a big baggier. I have been working on making the clothing looser.
Kiki_Akuma, 14 Nov 2007 05:56 pm
Anyway, to the point. The pants go into the shoes. That is... NO. Nonononono. And I see there's some red left in the shoes. Once again, NONONONONO. Just a little tip, give the clothing your own shading rather than just recoloring on the clothes.
Kiki_Akuma, 14 Nov 2007 06:06 pm
Smeezette, 14 Nov 2007 07:08 pm
I have a right to name my work whatever the hell I want to name it. And no, it isn't a recolor. Did you even look at the sprite?
Of course, being so predictable, I know that you're just going to turn this post around on me to make it look like I'm the bad guy. Let's see you make a perfect sprite, buddy.
Afroman17, 14 Nov 2007 08:17 pm
Smeezette, 14 Nov 2007 08:37 pm
And as I said, you're trying to make me look like the bad guy. You can't pull that shit on me that you pull on everybody else. There is a difference from critiqueing, and being an ass. If you're going to say anything, at least make it helpful. Do you really think that you can "help" the SmackJeeves community by telling them that their works are "peices of shit" and whatnot. Yet, I realize you haven't actually said that, so don't even go there. You want to help? Then say something constructive. Say something that helps. Say something that spriters could use, rather than trying to be a smart ass. I'm tired of you thinking you rule Smackjeeves with your "supieriour critiqueing".
Smeezette, 14 Nov 2007 08:52 pm
Feniks, 15 Nov 2007 10:10 am
Buruzu, 15 Nov 2007 04:08 pm
Anydamnway, these sprites need some help before you use them for anything... I'm about to type a lot, but it's worth your time to read it, along with what some of the others have already said. Now then...
There needs to be some actual shading on the clothes, rather then just an outline drawn around a blob of color. It doesn't have to be fancy, but it DOES need to be there; otherwise, your character looks flat. There are tutorials about this; If you look for them, I'm sure they'll help you.
Also, I think you ought to look at his body coloration; his skin tone, his fur/spines/what have you, and his eyes. From what I can see, the color you used for his skin and eyes are EXACTLY the same as Sonic's. If you, at the very least, tweak his eye and skin color, he'll look less like Sonic... or, at least, he'll begin to.
One last thing. I realize his fur/spines are supposed to be black, but he's much too dark! Make his colors contrast some more; The highlight on him should be lighter. Again, that will help with the flat look.
Spike116, 16 Nov 2007 05:14 pm
Spike116, 19 Nov 2007 09:31 am
Dark-Chaos, 05 Jan 2008 02:19 pm
Thats what is called a fox in japan ('Spirit Fox' for direct translation).
and the é should give the same sound in english as e does in japanese.
Felix Wind, 25 Jan 2008 12:32 pm
But without the a and y. ._.
the_green_pikmin, 16 Oct 2008 01:59 pm